let me know what you think and any tips or ideas will be great =]

Nice Man

Obviously get rid of the seam in the back uhhhh lighten up the base color and add shadings possibly change all of those lines into plates and yah

The large line in the back seems too thick, it might work better if you trimmed it down. Also, the eyes seem strangely placed, try making the, i'm guessing it's supposed to be circuitry, lines interact with the eyes more, and look less like they're under them.

ok the line only shows up in this but not in game. and the circuitry is coming from the sigma sign. kinda like a metaphore meaning that sigma is the power to me in toribash lol

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