starter was ok, u shouldnt move the neck much. First kick could get the glutes as well if u edited it a bit but its ok. so with the second one.
The arm dm was random and it looked kinda weird.
The skeets were, um.. weird, I thought u were going for the head but u just threw it up and then threw the second hand at it.

Since its a wip its ok, there are some things u could improve

Try and up your momentum a little bit

DM's doesn't matter if you don't take time to make them look nice

Get a stronger boomhit

I liked the spinnies though.

But the pacing was a little bit slow, you know?

7.5/10 for the style

a lit something u wanted me to edit, u used xspar as a mod lol, cant get dms there