Still very sitff.
The only thing I liked in this replay was the boom.
Sorry :/

5/10

sry too hear that
I'll make a better one

new replay
need some cnc
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bump. need cnc pls
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new replay
need cnc pls

bump. would somebody please comment
I can't post my other replays with out you guys commenting first

1st replay, - Too stiff. Had flow but too jagged. Awesome booms though :P 6.5/10

2nd replay, - First off, you missed the 2nd boom, you coulda gone bigger right between the legs. Somewhat stiff at middle and both had nice poses that stuck. 7/10

Both well done, keep making more. Hope to see more 7dms in the future

Very nice Max.

There is a bit of stiffness after the booms, but overall the replays were smooth and had good flow. Good poses.

Overall 8/10

thanks for the advice and comments
btw new replay , this was probably my best opener so far
p.s gonna post a tricking replay after I get cnc on this

bump. really need cnc on this one

First kick was nice, tho it could have been a 4dm boom. Just aim a bit higher.
After that you did a weird stiff step. Don't fully contract that hip, hold it b4 that.
The rest is nice. If you want more dm's just work an that aim.
Also the pose is not good. Its better if you just stop moving and lower ur body if you cant keep balance. Because these little steps look bad.

Keep it up, you are getting better . 8/10

new replay
I think is ruined the flow in the middle of the replay
Largekilla : I took your advice and lowered my body to a pose , but I sorta peeked at one of your replays to see how you do it

need cnc on this

I liked the opener and the jump before you posed ,well with some fantasy your end pose loocks like an angry wrestler but in fact it looks like an old woman who tries to pee lol

nice replay anyway 7/10 (some more dms and another end pose would be nice)
keep it up , i like your replays