some shit i made since i felt so boring.

Your manip starts tend to be fabulous but then you end it too quickly and it gets jerky and goes awful. Your start is incredible in boringshit but the ending is so bleh. Mind if I edit it for personal enjoyment? I won't post it just feel like editting it.

u can edit them idk. and i just do radmon shit when i get boring anyway.

my TWC entry :3.
took me like 15mins

TWC Shit:

The opener I can't CnC for reasons known.

The way you did the first kick was impressive.

I didn't like how you where lying on the floor while you dismembered uke.

The kick at 210 was very bland and unnecessary.

The pose needs a little bit of work.

8/10

thx for cnc.
also i'm suck at posing anyway :v

The opener looked alright right from the start, but you twitched a bit when you randomly extended your right knee. The way you turned around could have looked a bit better if you controlled the way your lumber bends. It made your turn around look twitchy because your lumbar jerked back and forth. Afterwards, you grabbed uke, which really killed all the flow you got from your opener. The kicks were all okay, but it's not that pleasant to watch, seeing you fall back onto the ground as you try to kick at uke. The pose could have definitely worked if you edited it more. You just gotta practice on posing, man. A protip for posing is that you should always try to be flat on your feet while seeing where your center of gravity is.
Overall, this replay could have looked a lot better if you did different things. You have some potential man, you just gotta work harder at making your replays look good.

i didn't even took long time or focus in making this replay so it's not so good .
anyway some other replays c:

new shit.
cnc pls

cnc pls