everything was godlike looking until the part you go for a transition to the split
avoid doing reverse momentum in those transitions for dm's(unless you know when they look good),and you kinda made a stop here.
i dont like either the way you made that grabby dm,i know you was in a bad position to make a transition for another dms,but man,you could just make a fast jump,or just make uke go higher after the split and make you have time to make the other move,also you could get the pec and the sholder.
the other dm was okay,could be better if you was on air or something,but still looking good.
the other dm kinda looked weird,what about just giving it to the air and making a spinkick?
the transition to end pose was fabulous.