Been on a hiatus for like the 5th time and want to (kinda) get better at rpl making. First one after hiatus here

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Sick flow, like seriously, no twitching or random movements you deserve a cookie for that.
There's not much to say about all the rest because it's pretty generic, you should make a pose on the end instead of falling over. Still very nice replay but maybe put some more creativity into it

Hello!
You seem to barely use your lumbar, try be more dynamic with tricks.
The constant raisings and lowerings bugged me.
You seem to keep tapping yourself with your arms, that kills your momentum.
Opener was generic.
New few tricks are alright.
Then the abs took a seizure, try use that joint less to avoid spasms.
Try to avoid keeping your arms in the same position.
Pretty alright cork and such.
Launch after is bad.
Work on your poses.
Not too bad man, I definitely see room for improvement though. Just keep at it!
Good luck!


EDIT: Try speed up your tricks, they're a little slow