Guy1321:
BoomBoomPew: The first two kicks flowed nicely and came across to me as quite powerful. However, the decap did look a bit stressed and did not flow as well as the first half of the replay. I would have excused a grab if you could have boomed the torso that was dangling next to you.
ExtendedKick: I quite liked the decap here, even if it was a little weak. You were a bit twitchy throughout the replay though, especially regarding the knees. It gives an air of unprofessionality, try to avoid doing it. Apart from that, I did like the replay.
RunningAndSpinRunning: You did well to keep your balance for so long and run that far. The running itself looked relatively smooth, except for a few leg twitches (again).
Overall: I don't think the three replays you presented are ORMO material. However, I will happily evaluate any more madman type replays you may have, as I think you have potential in this area. Focus on smoothness and destruction. I look forward to seeing you apply again.
Originally Posted by
ChuiGum
P.S. Do I have to post a different set of replays everytime? Or can I repost the 3 least frowned upon replays?
You do not have to post three different replays each time; for example, if one replay did particularly well in your last application, you may keep that one in. Try to vary the replays you apply with, though. Anyway, your application.
Alphanumeric cans: A little grab-heavy. The hits did come thick and fast, which I liked. There was nothing fundamentally wrong with the execution at all, but I can't help but notice that it lacks 'personality'. The kicks were all pretty generic and were nothing new to behold.
Carbon Coated V2: I liked this replay a lot, I reckon it's good enough for ORMO. The second kick was excellent, I like how your leg travelled very low to reach the glutes. I can't really fault it at all, except that if you look at the right side of your body during the buildup to the second kick, your arm and leg are very twitchy, moving this way and that. It looks slightly odd and kinda kills the flow.
Full of win: Very well done on this one. The hits were excellent, and the whole replay was practically nograb (if you excuse the few frames of grab to bring the legs closer to you). You could have loosened up a little to make the travelling parts more pleasing to the eye however, as your knees tended to remain contracted the whole time. Other than that, an ORMO-standard replay.
Overall: I'm leaning very much towards a yes. We'll have to wait and see what others think.
Last edited by Marco; Mar 11, 2010 at 12:28 AM.
