You're pretty fluid with your movements and thats damn good, but towards the
end where you were trying to pose all those twitchy movements were pretty
bad. You shouldn't land and then try to pose, you should be thinking about
your pose as you're nearing your landing and move in a way where you will
naturally shift into the pose.
Also if you're going to do replays like these you should do them in -30
gravity, there is no point in doing them in low gravity since every the worst
players can do this kind of stuff in that gravity. You're moves are good though
and I'm sure you'll thrive in -30 all the same.