Toribash
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[IMG]First Tori draw
Here ya go



it's my first try at the tori draw with a little help of the screenie what should i add what should i delete etc tell me some advices
<iRookie>This clan got a lot of epic members, such as missuse and Aj, Pulse and Kaszanas, and I want to be part of them.
I would say It's great for your first,but this is great overall 10/10
<Fish> How is being a dumbass a form of venting? Is this some sort of flatulence related joke?
Pretty good but has funky shading/lighting. Too hard to explain in words.. I can show you with arrows if you want.

I give it a 7/10.
Clean up the lines and add some shading. might want to skip the blue colors for now and think of something less exploding. As for now, all I notice is the blue. Everything else fades to the background.
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It's great ok, for first. You need to fix the lines, fix the shades. Also I think the reason that people like it is the combination with white and raider.
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Here's another try comment this


Tried to shade it ...

And try without black shades on joints
Last edited by Kaszanas; Jul 28, 2010 at 01:58 PM.
<iRookie>This clan got a lot of epic members, such as missuse and Aj, Pulse and Kaszanas, and I want to be part of them.
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ekhm 7 hours gone
and i really need the advices what i can do better guys help !
<iRookie>This clan got a lot of epic members, such as missuse and Aj, Pulse and Kaszanas, and I want to be part of them.
they both looks great but you should not make a face in the head or just make a better face ^^
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