well... its not bad... but you'll have to smooth it out a bit... try to moove as much joints as possible...
im kinda noob to pivot too so... i cant comment much....
well ur good for a noob(i hate that word) just use simpler sticks cuz there sooooooo much easier 2 use in fight scenes. once u get btr then use detailed stix. do sum punch tests also and get punches 2 b faster