well i will say 4 tips for you
1) Try to go slower with your openers speed so you can work both in the same speed
2) dont keep your knees to bendet (idk how to spell that) cuse it looks bad

3) Dont keep yours arms too high or u will have trouble and your tori will lose balance

4) Dont do glitchy stuffs.
u sometimes extract then contract again that doesnt look good
just keep them relaxed in most bids.
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made this spar long time ago
its a short spar and the ko is a bit unseenable
cuse i punched him (yes in the balls (not gay at all) )
and i ko him with a kick at the head.

spar Kirinoi.rpl
first that replay was shit lol i didnt take it srsly :PP
anyway try to post more sp replays denilumi
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Karbn
i didnt like the mp replays but
please try to post at less 1 sp replay
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some tips to Karbn

1-try to work in 1 thing in every spar like
if you going to spar some one say i will work in my kicks
or my balance (balance means blocking and dodging a lot with out losing your balance)
or punchs
(that will help you improve faster at punching and kicking)
anyway work in punches you have a style looks like shikkumo style
but you are doing that style with out punching
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2-try to do more realistc or realism launches like shikkumo launches
how to make them more realistc? be close to the ground and dont jump too far up
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3-if you got a good stand to start punching dont change it to a launch or a kick
try to balance and start punching or blocking or what ever you wanna do
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4- try to stop launching a lot(thats just me)
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anyway best of luck Karbn i hope i see more sp replays from you
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a sp replay am working own :P i was bored and this happend
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and another parkour replay with Karbn (i felt bored and i quit the game)

Thanks for the info! I wasn't too happy with those replays, but according to rules I have to hand in at least 1 replay every 2 days, so that was the replay :P I was working on kicks and spinning, so I hoped it showed!
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Thanks man ^_^ I'll be working on this as well
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YESSSS I LOVE THE VAULT OVER IN THE BEGGINING <3
couple things I think might look better

That jump over the gap just wasn't up to par with what you usually produce, you should really change that around to a proper jump so you can make that gap and keep running instantly. that's really the only thing, love the flow, every movement had its use, and overall it's a good replay! Could use some polishing up to make it a fantastic replay, but it's a good replay that is better than most :P

umm when did i say Moar info ?? wtf
plz link me that

Kirinoi
dont extract ur knees for too much frames when u run cuse looks bad
nice landing
nice flow
nice jump at the end.
8/10

Lol I just shortened what you said XD instead of clogging up the chat with all those quotes, I thought it might be better to just have a very short sentence that essentially states what was said. Sorry about that!

Extend* and yeah fully extended knees don't always look good, but that was just in the beginning of the replay.

Also here is an other pk I've just started and I'll probably scrap, like the rest lol

OK nvm that. I finally made an alright tricking o: Yeah the follow up after the first trick was between megh and bad but still it's better that what I usually get

The parkour looks good, the only thing I have to say is that second stretch between platforms wasn't as good as it could've been, just fix that, and it'd honestly be a really solid start!

the tricking also looks really good :3

For the first trick you contracted your right leg too early which slowed your momentum, and after the first trick your knees are kinda stiff. Everything else looked good to me. I can't really trick though, so maybe I'm not the one to listen to.

Anyway I made this thing.

Instep to be honest i dont see something wrong with this replay(Instep - M - Allegiance.rpl)
its just a common replay but a good one