Alright then... u've asked me to be honest... and I will be honest...
The heart of stone thing replay... it's not good.
The way that ur body move so rigidly is so... unprofessional... like ur tori is constipated or sumthin... use relax more please... or at least use a lower turnframe... Let me gie u a tip yeah? Press Shift + P to move every frame when ur editing
And to me it seems like ur style is pressing random joints and hope for the best... not good... I mean like... wtf is that part where u laid down and started flopping about like a paralyzed fish... then the way u danced around in order to go behind Uke... and where u kicked ur hand (well it seemed like u 'tried' kicking it at least) ... u actually needed Uke's help to score a decap... at least make it look like u know what ur doing... Like... review ur replay every 50 frames...
Like I said... I will answer honestly because u've asked for it
Last edited by DanSan48; Dec 21, 2015 at 05:03 PM.