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Eh


While I enjoy the opener and how fast paced this is, you can/should do better.

After the opener take off you didn't look stylish anymore. You kicked with the same leg as you did the split, which isn't that bad but to compensate for it you should have had a better hit. Yours was messy, always try to hit with the foot block. The only time a thigh dm is acceptable is in a 4-5-6-7 dm boom, to have more space to dislodge the joints. Same goes for the next hit as well. At around 717, you kind of looked silly in the air. I did enjoy the take-off of the jump, but the landing was awkward.


Keep on practicing, you'll get there eventually.
Nice replay, nice combos, nice speed.
It just need a better aiming and power.
Also you should have end it at frame 650, little tricks after the action are not good Imo.
You are getting better. Keep it up.
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Good day Dr. Freud
just a quickly made replay , I couldn't get a boom after my flip so it would be nice to see someone edit this replay and boom the second kick
need cnc though
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I like the opener , the kicks was very powerful.
Nice pose but , The pose does not hold.
9.2/10
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Opener was pretty random but cool.
The boom was really nice made.
The kick on the lower body could have a bigger DM.
And the pose was cool put didn't hold.

Good job.

8/10
M I N I V A N
The replay was very nice, up until you jumped and spoiled it . The jump was extremely stiff and not good looking. The boom itself could have been more destructive, and the head kick after made you lose your balance and flow in mid air, making the landing kind of bad. After that you were a bit random and stiff. Where's the movement you had at the start?
I'm going to post a new version of factloes soon
thanks for the cnc btw
Edit :
heres the new version of factloes , I hope you guys like it
I can't get a pose that could hold though
need some cnc
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Last edited by maxfire1; Dec 12, 2011 at 12:51 PM.
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I was going to cnc on it but then I saw that you move uke intentionally.
Don't do that! Not cool.

Other than that, the kick's were nice.
[ORMO] [OLDA] [The Team] [The JHX Experience]
Good day Dr. Freud
heres a new version , sry for moving uke's knee , I was just desparate for a last boom
I just replaced the last kick with a skeet
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