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The opener looked a bit strange.
That first boom was nice, but the grab kinda killed your flow.
Your legs and the kick were also quite a bit stiff.
The next boom (Not sure because the dms were seperate) had a nice transition from the first boom.
However, it could've been more destructive. (Like hitting that crotch block off for another dm)
The end was a bit too random, and it didn't look too good.
You also didn't pose.
Work on your openers. Make sure they have some way of gaining some speed and that they look good.
I think you got your booms down, but, if you aim them more accurately, you could get bigger booms.
Work on posing, I'm sure you are able to make one.
That first boom was nice, but the grab kinda killed your flow.
Your legs and the kick were also quite a bit stiff.
The next boom (Not sure because the dms were seperate) had a nice transition from the first boom.
However, it could've been more destructive. (Like hitting that crotch block off for another dm)
The end was a bit too random, and it didn't look too good.
You also didn't pose.
Work on your openers. Make sure they have some way of gaining some speed and that they look good.
I think you got your booms down, but, if you aim them more accurately, you could get bigger booms.
Work on posing, I'm sure you are able to make one.
The opener was a bit akward. I usually love akward openers, but not this one because you were a bit stiff on your legs too.
The split and the boomhits were alright, but the boomkick was not really with your foot, it was with your whole leg.
The next boom was very nice and had a good transition.
The skeet was very stiff, but somehow you managed to dm the knee. It's a really short range skeet though.
The pose is bad, you really need to make a pose where you preferably can stand for 500 frames whithout falling, that usually helps me.
The split and the boomhits were alright, but the boomkick was not really with your foot, it was with your whole leg.
The next boom was very nice and had a good transition.
The skeet was very stiff, but somehow you managed to dm the knee. It's a really short range skeet though.
The pose is bad, you really need to make a pose where you preferably can stand for 500 frames whithout falling, that usually helps me.
oh yeah
Well you sure can boom, but the movement need's to be more fluid.
Now that you have proven that you can boom, I would advise you to pay less attention to the dm's and focus on your moves.
Also you tend to grab a bit to much. Grabs are not bad but if you do them for too long it end up looking weird. Do transition left-right right-left. And an other thing I think its much better if you do the grab 1 frame before the hand hits instead of 10 or 20 frames.
You have potential keep it up.
Now that you have proven that you can boom, I would advise you to pay less attention to the dm's and focus on your moves.
Also you tend to grab a bit to much. Grabs are not bad but if you do them for too long it end up looking weird. Do transition left-right right-left. And an other thing I think its much better if you do the grab 1 frame before the hand hits instead of 10 or 20 frames.
You have potential keep it up.
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