Twitchy opener.
The first kick was okay. A little stiffness here and there.
Next kick was sweet, but I think you could've gotten the head off with a little more aim and precision. 5 DM boom. \o/
Oh, it was also very stiff.
Next kick, meh.
Next kick, meh.
You need to put more style in your hits, and you need A LOT more flow put in as well.
You grab way too much, try to do non-grabbed hits.
Your movements are somewhat stiff, so try to loosen up, but not too much.
It was okay, the only thing I actually liked was just the 4 DM boom itself.
Oh, yeah, work on posing a bit.