Alright so...
shabam: Opener was okay, first kick was good. Second kick was alright, but then the transition into your third kick was meh. It seemed a tad slow. And as for the pose, it just looked like you fell into place [plop].
spodash: I don't know where to begin because there was a lot happening... It just looked like you were flopping around trying to get as many dms as possible. That being said, there were some parts in the replay that wowed me. But not the entire replay itself.