I'll say right off the bat that I don't like floppy necks :C

Opener was a bit odd at first, but it transformed into that wonderful knee spin boom thingy which was awesome. The movement afterwards was a little twitchy, but it was creative and I liked the skeet thing. Probably could have avoided hitting your head on uke's leg. I liked the transition into the decap and the decap itself, those were fine. There's some stuff that needed smoothing out in this one but you said you didn't have a lot of time so yeah.