WHAT AN IMPROVEMENT.
Got lazy on the last few frames tho
10/10
Got lazy on the last few frames tho
10/10
"they're like enormous pillows of disgusting girly meat" ~Orih 2016
My Replays
My Replays
this is my first more in-depth cnc in a long time, only cause i really want to see yo hoe ass improve
not a fan of how you started the replay, both of your pecs were extended which does not look good, and the right leg which you used to push off wasn't fully extended
you should have extended/relaxed the right leg in the start before you pushed off then contracted for maximum momentum, instead you pushed off a slightly bent leg and contracted it mid air wich isn't very pretty
at around 410 i thought you were gonna go for a launch thingy but instead you reverse rotated which isn't very pretty either
the manip hits were ok cause i know jack shit about manips, but that kick around 300 looked ass and seemed kinda pointless, focus more on your own movements rather than on elevating uke as much as possible
fuckin love the jump before the dms, intense af!!
however it bothered me that you immediately went for the bashing with the leg you used to lift off, waiting a bit then hitting with the other one always looks so much better.
cool grab switch thingy attempt, though i'm not a fan of the shoulder raise at around 100
still need to work on twitchyness a bit
good job overall, i hope i didn't come off as mean or something cause the replay was indeed good and i really want you to improve because you have the potential.
not a fan of how you started the replay, both of your pecs were extended which does not look good, and the right leg which you used to push off wasn't fully extended
you should have extended/relaxed the right leg in the start before you pushed off then contracted for maximum momentum, instead you pushed off a slightly bent leg and contracted it mid air wich isn't very pretty
at around 410 i thought you were gonna go for a launch thingy but instead you reverse rotated which isn't very pretty either
the manip hits were ok cause i know jack shit about manips, but that kick around 300 looked ass and seemed kinda pointless, focus more on your own movements rather than on elevating uke as much as possible
fuckin love the jump before the dms, intense af!!
however it bothered me that you immediately went for the bashing with the leg you used to lift off, waiting a bit then hitting with the other one always looks so much better.
cool grab switch thingy attempt, though i'm not a fan of the shoulder raise at around 100
still need to work on twitchyness a bit
good job overall, i hope i didn't come off as mean or something cause the replay was indeed good and i really want you to improve because you have the potential.
You know what and why.
WIP rite ere. :< )
Thanks, Sheer00. xoxo, Sparrr.
WIP rite ere. :< )
Thanks, Sheer00. xoxo, Sparrr.
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you're really good at manipulation but you need to work on your dms and try to not grab when you're trying to get a dm unless its a boom or something ypur movements are good and the hits you doo look like they have power but the dms don't show that
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