before telling you what I didnt like in the replay and how you can "improve" (what I call cnc'ing), I want you to know that this replay is neat
I literally have just one complaint in the whole replay and apart this I find everything else awesome. This tiny detail in your opener is almost unnoticeable and has more to do with my personal liking than anything, but I spotted it extremely easily and couldn't avoid mentioning.
while in first couple frames, before you started the break dance (around frame 720), you rotated your chest all of sudden, something that is visually an eyesore in my opinion, even more when it comes from you that have clean and smooth movements predominantly. An aesthetically better looking opener would have a more "relaxed" and "patient" chest usage (not literally though) making the movement look a bit more planned on how to execute or something like this. Not sure if you understand what I mean, but the whole opener would look like a single flow/momentum gain.
I tried to reproduce an ideal opener situation but I failed miserably, this opener is really hard by itself and I consider this "slip" in your movement consistency a side effect of being somewhat rusty because, as I said, everything else is perfect.
tl;dr first move wasnt as clean and smooth as it could be
Now to my favorite points: despite of this big boy text over there^ I loved the opener, the break dance itself looked sweet. Half split is good too but there isn't much about it, what comes next is what I like the most. The way you decap'd uke as you were
kneading his upper body is awesome.
another small detail I liked a lot is your pose, mainly when you step back to balance. Looked as simple as it should be in real, one clean and fast move
Last edited by Lionet; Dec 29, 2018 at 03:06 PM.