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hello senpai!
look like you are out of inspiration today :v
well the start wasn't bad. you could've done something cool from there doe
the rush thing was ok
kneecaps are always a good thing to see (i wish i can do it easly .-.)
decapo is fine.
not bad but i'd like to see a classic replay of yours with alot of dms
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It's just no one usues my shit .
oi fren

this is a pretty cool replay, its nice a realistic, but it still has some flaws here and there
the first few frames were really stiff but the opener ended up working out
the punch could have had more dms and overall been a bit smoother but its aight
cool replay m8 8/10
That combo was sick speed was great, and it was very smooth, for what I am assuming to be little effort on your end that shit looks better than most tbh.
Last edited by Murcinary; Mar 25, 2017 at 06:13 PM.
Another shitty replay, a bit better than the last one I hope.
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I swore I've used the same opener in an oc competition or something, but its still a really nice opener. If you made it really good job, smooth bruv

transitions and stuff around 337 looked off to me, like you forgot about your arms and focused on your kick instead so its not as flowy as it could be.

double knee was decent

didnt like the transition at all looked a bit lazy imo, the punch was ok though

You let yourself get hit in the face with a butt though, I'm sure there is a way you can get the same punch without getting hoobastank'd.

back kick was nice, however you did a massive twitch afterwords that takes away from it.

didn't care for the skeet though it looks out of place, probably because you took so long to skeet something practically next to you but its just my opinion.

got some good things going on there, is gud
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yeah, transitions are pretty shit, I kinda hate spending time on them. But to me it doesn't look like I'm hitting my face on ukes butt. At least it isn't bruised for me

Thanks!
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Bump, I've p much broken my left ring finger and it's quite the swollen mess. Having a hard time making replays and shit for the time being.
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Overall the replay was amazing, everybit of CnC on this is just the tiniest little nitpick stuff. You can completely ignore it if you dont want to see my personal opinion on the slightest tidbits.
9/10

The opening spins I feel could have been a bit faster
The lumbar was a bit wonky throughout in all honesty, like bent just a bit too far a few times
The boomhit missed a pec
You over extend your abs more than once throughout the replay
The opener was extremely bland and generic at first
There was nothing entirely special but rather just a good display of flow and continuing your momentum.
The pose was meh and you twitched along with your lumbar was severely crippled.

What you did show was fucking fabulous and I loved every bit of it.
The boom fit perfectly in with the start and wasn't jerky like most boomhits have a tendency to be.
I really enjoyed the ending dickpunch even if you didnt dm his crotchblock.
The pose had a smooth aspect getting into it.
Overall it was very smooth.

Good.fucking.job.and.fuck.you.for.being.better.tha n.me.
Knock down da walls wiv big rocks and kill all the men wiv arras. - Lamby
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