Thanks niriss and yea it is actually getting very easy for me to play
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Thanks alot sonny
and yea i believe we do have the similar style
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Thanks alot sonny
and yea i believe we do have the similar style
Last edited by Roi214; Jun 9, 2013 at 10:16 PM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I'm seriously not going to watch all of those. Just post one at a time so your viewers don't stray away from seeing such a large amount of replays they have to watch.
CnC to Beat -
The opener was nothing new, seen it way too many times that I could call it generic.
The punch was alright, nothing special. Next punch flowed in nicely, but you could've switched from punch to punch a lot quicker.
I didn't like how you slammed your head into the arm to DM it, it looked messy and wasn't too pretty.
The skeet wasn't impressive due to the short distance between you and Uke's head.
The first kick you made on the glutes seemed a bit pointless. I think an immediate transition to the next skeet would've been more necessary. Skeet was okay.
You could've gotten another DM from that glute crush.
The voodoo was alright, but you could've gotten waaaay more DMs than just one.
Also, some notes you might want to fix.
- Your arms are too stiff some times, try contracting them when you're not using them for a certain amount of frames then relaxing them.
- The amount of grab you use is a little over the top. Try practicing non-grab hits, try to make transitions to Uke without grabbing him.
- You focus a lot on destruction, but not on overall look of the replay. This replay was a bit boring, since you didn't do anything that sticks out to the eye. Try to work on adding a bit more flare and style.
CnC to Beat -
The opener was nothing new, seen it way too many times that I could call it generic.
The punch was alright, nothing special. Next punch flowed in nicely, but you could've switched from punch to punch a lot quicker.
I didn't like how you slammed your head into the arm to DM it, it looked messy and wasn't too pretty.
The skeet wasn't impressive due to the short distance between you and Uke's head.
The first kick you made on the glutes seemed a bit pointless. I think an immediate transition to the next skeet would've been more necessary. Skeet was okay.
You could've gotten another DM from that glute crush.
The voodoo was alright, but you could've gotten waaaay more DMs than just one.
Also, some notes you might want to fix.
- Your arms are too stiff some times, try contracting them when you're not using them for a certain amount of frames then relaxing them.
- The amount of grab you use is a little over the top. Try practicing non-grab hits, try to make transitions to Uke without grabbing him.
- You focus a lot on destruction, but not on overall look of the replay. This replay was a bit boring, since you didn't do anything that sticks out to the eye. Try to work on adding a bit more flare and style.
