Is it supposed to be that the ears look so elfish? Otherwise rounding them off would fit it well. That one eyebrow looks realy big, above the other eye it looks like she got dirt is that supposed to be like that?
Otherwise since its just an update its looking realy good! Just as i know it from you calam! B-)
lip looks really shriveled up now, not sure how it'd look in game
ears are too pointy (unless he wants an elf)
the mouth just looks plain awkward i think you should redo it completely. The eyes and mouth are giving completely different expressions so I can't tell if she wants to fuck me or if she just wet the bed