Toribash
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[Rap] Rate and battle the person above you!
Hey guys! This seemed like a great idea, so I thought I should do it!

Rules are simple:
1) Rate the rapper above you!
2) Battle him with your own rhymes!
3) Length doesn't matter too much, but one liners aren't really "professional"

I'll start this off.

My name is Ness,
Try to keep up, don't fall behind like the rest,
You watch in awe, simplistically seeing i'm the best,
Q.i. doesn't matter,
I'm a psychopath.
They call me the mad hatter.
Give me a rate,
then rap below,
But watch out.
Your "experience" will show.
Last edited by xNess; Nov 28, 2013 at 06:42 PM.
Originally Posted by xNess View Post
Hey guys! This seemed like a great idea, so I thought I should do it!

Rules are simple:
1) Try to keep it clean!
2) Rate the rapper above you!
3) Battle him with your own rhymes!
4) Length doesn't matter too much, but one liners aren't really "professional"

I'll start this off.

My name is Ness,
Try to keep up, don't fall behind like the rest,
You watch in awe, simplistically seeing i'm the best,
Q.i. doesn't matter,
I'm a psychopath.
They call me the mad hatter.
Give me a rate,
then rap below,
But watch out.
Your "experience" will show.

Lol, define clean, also it wouldn't be fair if I contributed since I'm a sounds designer, a rapper, and I'm half black. So I'd just dominate.
Originally Posted by Zoni View Post
Lol, define clean, also it wouldn't be fair if I contributed since I'm a sounds designer, a rapper, and I'm half black. So I'd just dominate.

Ok, forget clean. Give me your worst.
Originally Posted by T0ribush View Post
Hahaha sounds designer, a rapper and half black


0/10

Did you honestly think that was a rap?
Do you honestly think I'm rating your non-existent rap skills?
I was rating you as an opponent
Originally Posted by T0ribush View Post
Do you honestly think I'm rating your non-existent rap skills?
I was rating you as an opponent

You haven't seen me spit, and I highly doubt you know anything about real rap, please tell me your favorite rapper.
Me first?

This one maybe writing
So he has a fighting chance
In the ring fearing he's
Picked the wrong enemy
So he's trying hard to find
Some hardcore lyrics before
He gets ripped apart right from
The start without a chance to spit
A NEW CHALLENGER HAS APPEARED!

Wrong enemy to pick? HEH!
I don't really think so just know I am picking on you! BRING IT ON I can go boss I can beat you so bad you will be crying! I never loss,
I bring on the smoke of terror! transferring it into letters!
My raps are dope think I lost? I say NOPE! Do you think Im a joke?
Oh look there it's me! I bring on the fear from All over of the SPHERE of earth

Now now now don't cry yet pal I am not finished yet,
I scratch apart, TEAR THEM TO SHREDS!
You can't bear the pain of suffering now!
Try to run! You will never ESCAPE


*Walks out of the room
Last edited by Lushsmoke; Dec 1, 2013 at 10:16 PM.
I'm ready for my daily dose of cringe ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)