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Old Feb 28, 2017   #81
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Aight', just bumping.

Again.

CnC / Feedback, would be, appreciated.
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Old Mar 1, 2017   #82
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try to shade with the side of your pencil tip.
You are drawing too wide lines for a finished piece, also try to shade with colors.

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Old Mar 2, 2017   #83
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While your shading is decent, it is a bit misplaced.
I recommend you to try to add some background if you decide to do some art and upload it on for example "DeviantArt".
Since the main focus is the character, don't make the background to detailed.
Your linework is a little bit to thick on the clothes.
That was it for now.
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Old Mar 11, 2017   #84
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Im just fucking better with some GOOD OL' PENCILS.

First time i'm doing a portrait of someone...
Way down we go 
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Old 4 Weeks Ago   #85
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Yo, lot of stuff to add
lit' af
AvP Fanart 

Portrait of a girl I had a crush on 

Small manga page attempt 

A portrait of a japanese character I made 

Small sketch of a character I need to finish omfg 

Cyborg-Samourai Guy, like to eat sushi and kill people. Duh 

A Cat-Man that is the cook, the waiter and the barman, basically dealing with all those jobs and the customers at the same time 

Making my own monsters , the "Murmure" , basically Murmure is the french word for "Whisper" 
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Old 2 Weeks Ago   #86
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If any one can give me out some tips / or where to start to get a black and white comics books inking style...
This inking style if you really don't know (Batman Inking by Rusten) 

I mean what do you need to do those kind of inking ? What type of pen / markers ? Really curious and got no idea where to start

Anyway I tried to do something in that style as a quick test
Meh, nailed it I guess 
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Old 1 Week Ago   #87
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Bump' ahead
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Old 1 Week Ago   #88
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B/ump
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Old 1 Week Ago   #89
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Nice vector there I guess.
You need to get the form and anatomy, but this last vector was really cool.
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