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Old Mar 15, 2017   #1
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Veoo, Calamity, and Ledray Collaboration: A Robot
Ledray, Veoo, Calamity:
NEW WIP (LEDRAY+VEOO) 



WIP

We've put a lot of work into this, so here it is:

Flates:
WIP Flats NORMAL IMAGES [NOT LINKS] 


IN-GAME Image links


Program: Sketch book, not positive but I'm pretty sure calamity used krita

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Ok, I've decided to make a list of requests of changes for the 4th WIP so we can try to make them happen here they are so far:

- Eyes need fixed/a different look
- Color choice is awkward
- Looks bland / add something that pops

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Old Mar 15, 2017   #2
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could you ask calamity for the programs he used? unless of course you both used sketchbook

anyways, the side/back of the head is really empty and looks unfinished, i hope this is a wip since you didn't state so in the op

??? 


not a huge fan of the eyes and the top of the head could be blended better

i can see how this could go with a metallic/robotic kinda deal but it just doesn't look that good at all 


props to whoever did the bottom part though, it's really nice

just a solid robotic head overall, a bit of a bland color choice imo, nothing really stands out

also a watermarked flat would be nice
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Old Mar 15, 2017   #3
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Originally Posted by cats View Post
could you ask calamity for the programs he used? unless of course you both used sketchbook

anyways, the side/back of the head is really empty and looks unfinished, i hope this is a wip since you didn't state so in the op

??? 


not a huge fan of the eyes and the top of the head could be blended better

i can see how this could go with a metallic/robotic kinda deal but it just doesn't look that good at all 


props to whoever did the bottom part though, it's really nice

just a solid robotic head overall, a bit of a bland color choice imo, nothing really stands out

also a watermarked flat would be nice

Haha, I forgot to add that it was a WIP

Me and calamity both did the bottom part Ill post the WIPs we did soon

we focused on the face the rest is not even started

that part you pointed out on the helmet is barely touched but I didn't see it the way you explained it, Ill try to fix it, should I add something on the blank space? or just make it look more like metal?

As far as nothing standing out: Yeah I agree, I DON'T KNOW WHY THAT IS THO ((((( if you have any tips for additions that would be dope. thanks.

New wip later tonight.
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Old Mar 15, 2017   #4
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Looks nice! Love the bottom of the front of the face.
But I dislike the eyes. They look like bee eyes, in my opinion it doesn't fit well.

Looks like the main colors are grey, yellow, and orange.
I like the orange tube thing u guys did at the front of the head, maybe u guys could do that on the sides so it looks like hydraulics or something if u know what I mean.

Nice work so far!
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Old Mar 15, 2017   #5
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I use clip studio paint pro
Ima focus the sides next
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Old Mar 15, 2017   #6
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I much prefer the visor look in wip 1 and 2 rather than the weird bug eye things, it just looks more appealing imo, you should consider making it a visor instead, it would fit the overall look more i think
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Old Mar 16, 2017   #7
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Originally Posted by Kozmo View Post
I much prefer the visor look in wip 1 and 2 rather than the weird bug eye things, it just looks more appealing imo, you should consider making it a visor instead, it would fit the overall look more i think

Yeah the general thought is it should be a visor so I did a quick update just so calamity wouldn't have to deal with change it back to a visor (its not great, its just a quick clean up that hopefully calamity will improve upon):

WIP 4 (VEOO) 



BY THE WAY: I FORGOT TO ADD A WATERMARK, PLEASE DON'T STEAL IT
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Old Mar 16, 2017   #8
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with this WIP you got a better design, You can keep with it and will be fine.
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Old May 13, 2017   #9
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NEW WIP (LEDRAY) 


Led is getting on this head

LedRayxVeooxCalamity

heres the latest wip

eyes are still in progress
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Old May 13, 2017   #10
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can i see the flats?
Water mark it!

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