here it is:


CnC is apreciated.

im not sure how to critique this.

You could work on blending your crosshatching, through smoothing out the graphite with paper or your finger. There doesn't seem to be any sort of depth in the planets.
The fingers should be of different length.

Spot on with the nipples though :3

shading is needed more towards the top of his head and a bit more deatail on the planets as well as the detail would be nice 8/10

Made it in a hurry... I'll post some of my old drawings once i find them