so im making a new set and i want some help
and maybe some people that are intrested
got the head about finished

quikly done avatar(dont rate it!)


V1

v 2

v3

i added more detail in the black spots


ok added screenshots without shaders + added detail one the legs and thight
dont mind the groin and stuff yet was just a test
a bit pixaly but that's mostly my screenshot software






i dont reallly get the lines in the back?< ---- this text isnt mine its from the other guy


Don't double post, merged them. The only time you can double post is when you haven't gotten a reply in

ATLEAST 24 hours, just be patient.

i dint double post there was a post before mine
No there wasn't. If someone had deleted their post it would have a messege saying so. Just. Don't. Double. Post. K?

there a power source

litlle red and bleu lines are the wire's of the power source going in the whole body
MERGING YET ANOTHER POST. ~B

weird but ok


http://forum.toribash.com/showthread...01#post2773101

its done follow this link!

It's really just some blobby lines, no definition or shaping whatsoever. The back of the head is somewhat more detailed than the front, which it makes it look inconsistent, and the head overall is extremely basic and lacks shading, flow, or any sort of real design.

^ Oyster pretty much pointed out everything that sucks

1/10

Add shade and some more details, and that will be good for that ill give 3/10

legs and thigh done

and to be to hard im new at making rly advanced set

it is a very simple design nothing special.Also the blue neons look a little pixelated.
But i kinda like it.
When you show the preview please turn raytracnig off as i want to see it normal.

hmm kk wil update it without raytracing when i finish the arms

btw the pixel is mostly quase of the screenshot software and the zooming in of the screenshots dunno how to make them hq

It doesn't look nice, it looks like nothing, no shading, and the design has no purpose just random lines

just depands what you like quase i myself dont like overcomplicated texture's

since it is first time i see your work...
some advices if ya want...
on new layer
u should try using polygonial lasso tool and fill it with gradient
then duplicate layer and invert the colour and move it a bit up then create cliping mask on the top of layer and merge them... try using some blending options which can be found at layer bar or just go layers - layer style - blending options...
also try adding more details and lowering the eyes down...
try adding details to legs and the black parts of the head...
ok that is my opinion...