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Massive Attraction: Short and stiff running, you really need to relax some stuff
The trick was nice, but your leg flopped around a little bit around frame 765
Your arms looked akward in mid air
Blackout: The first step was a tad twitchy, but the rest was just fine
The spin was great, except for when your left leg was contracted at the start
The backflip was also great, but your legs felt at a time a bit too separated
The one that almost hit Uke was awesome, but at frame 381 you were very akward
Nice pose
The trick was nice, but your leg flopped around a little bit around frame 765
Your arms looked akward in mid air
Blackout: The first step was a tad twitchy, but the rest was just fine
The spin was great, except for when your left leg was contracted at the start
The backflip was also great, but your legs felt at a time a bit too separated
The one that almost hit Uke was awesome, but at frame 381 you were very akward
Nice pose
oh yeah
I'm never good at C^Cing tricks, which is why I avoided this thread... :P How about I'll C&c yours if you'll C&C mine. :3 Please. http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=364953
Massive attraction: Nice and clean, the jog was a bit off, though. Nice spin, but you did a twitch when you landed, and you extended your knee unnecessarily for the pose. It's the little things that take it from good to great.
Blackout: Nice spin with a good, clean landing. The flip, though, left me disappointed. You could've probably pulled off a skywalk. (I attached a replay. I didn't quite land it, but I came close, meaning that you probably could've gotten it. I don't know too much whwat I'm doing when it comes to tricking.) Also, as pusga mentioned, your body positioning was very awkward at and prior to frame 381.You cancelled your momentum and a not-so-attractive way.
You're good, though. Just need some fine-tuning.
Massive attraction: Nice and clean, the jog was a bit off, though. Nice spin, but you did a twitch when you landed, and you extended your knee unnecessarily for the pose. It's the little things that take it from good to great.
Blackout: Nice spin with a good, clean landing. The flip, though, left me disappointed. You could've probably pulled off a skywalk. (I attached a replay. I didn't quite land it, but I came close, meaning that you probably could've gotten it. I don't know too much whwat I'm doing when it comes to tricking.) Also, as pusga mentioned, your body positioning was very awkward at and prior to frame 381.You cancelled your momentum and a not-so-attractive way.
You're good, though. Just need some fine-tuning.
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