Originally Posted by Keshava

Okay first off, don't listen to royal's first sentence, even if people don't know anything about editing their feedback can still be important.
Second of all, @Royal, Luigizinhu is a great editor himself so don't assume that some people don't know anything about editing.

Now time for some cnc for you, you glorious bastard.

-At some points the camera gets too close to the Tori.
-Some parts of the velo felt a bit rushed but some other parts were excellent, I think you should make it a bit more snappy, like make the clip go faster at certain beats, from what I saw it was fast at times and at some points it was kinda slow.
-The colour correction, It's not bad, I think you should try a different hue though.
-Please do /opt bruise 0 and /opt grip 0.
-When you render I think you should lower it a bit, not sure what it was at now.
-Try to do something creative, you have been using those spin transitions and blur too often now, try experimenting with different effects, I like what you are doing though, keep it up!

Originally Posted by Havu

As Keshava said, don't listen to royal about how you shouldn't listen to people who don't know about editing. Those people still make up the majority of your views, so those are the people you should listen to in order to make your content more appealing.

Now I'll give you my 2 cents:

Your velo was a bit jumpy at points. Lower velo-changes could've made the video look smoother. It also makes it less laggy (which your video was a bit, not too much though), since your low-points aren't as slow as they are in the type of velocity you used.

The 2nd thing I'd like to point out is that the CC didn't quite fit the song. This, of course, is personal preference, but looking at other comments it seems to be the case more often than not. Imo something brighter and more colorful could've been nice. I like the old-film effects though. You didn't overdo it which is nice.

More effects could've been used, but I'm ok with a minimalistic style as well. Some sort of hue-based effects (color-changing) would've saved this edit from being so... plain. It never really lifts off or anything, it seems to just stay in one lane for the whole time. Could've used something to spice it up.

The last thing I can think of to critique you about is the freecam. It's definitely not bad, but it's not interesting either. As most things in your video, it ends up being a little boring. Quite well executed, but boring.

So yeah, next time try not to play it as safe and try to keep stuff interesting with whatever tools you have. The video was technically quite nice, which is refreshing, and shows that you should be capable of providing something that stands out.