Toribash
i really liked ur spar man it was really good and realistic had a very good flow and u killed uke with this punches combo at the end u psycho! D: lol jk 9/10 mate

here is mah replay thread and a new wip

http://forum.toribash.com/showpost.p...&postcount=206

also mah replay thread wich i has just started xD tell me what yah think

http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=297063
Imaparrot~!
"Before" was cool, the first kick seemed a tad weak, but it did have some style, the transition to the decap wasn't too great, but the decap itself added a nice touch. I liked the last kick, it was strong, but you could get around 2 more DMs. 8.5 out of 10, good one.

Wip is wip -_-. I do not like it though, I think you should go back to the first kick and get more DMs. I got a 2nd DM in about 10 seconds.

In Beem, the punch combo was decent, I think that you could have held your arms in a better position, and made the punches look more stylish. But the kicks were nice. The first one was very strong, you could have gotten a 4dm I bet. The last kick was creative, I liked how you delivered it, but again, you could have got another DM. 8.5/10

Your style is still being developed, and you have orgies of potential. Try freerunning. This can help your movement. I think soon your motions will become more fluid, and you will feel more comfortable. Then you will develop your own style. Good luck!
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thank u for the comment notes have been taken :3 i have tried freerun and sparring im getting a hold on it tho im not quite there check out this thread

http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=284014

also the wipzor got a bit more interesting :3 i need to dm the torso abit more ill be happy to get some tips on how to :3
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Last edited by imapirate; Aug 24, 2011 at 03:09 AM.
Imaparrot~!
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Some spars i did not to long ago =P and some other **** =P
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