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Old Jan 27, 2016   #11
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nice opener and split, but the last kick looks so weak..
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Old Jan 28, 2016   #12
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Bad day: All right, it's a good replay. What really makes it look bad though is how all the attacks lack a drawback, and explosive feel, and an aftermath.

Charge up the kick, look at all the joints, "does the kick look better if I extend my hip before starting the kick?"

After the attack, don't just relax stuff. Show us that the kick isn't made of surgical material, show is that it could break a brick wall after it had demolished uke, so keep that knee extended just a few frames before you contract/relax it!

Sorry for late cnc, but guess it's better than no cnc
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Old Jan 28, 2016   #13
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^ If you want to look like everyone else, listen to those peeps ^
I personaly love your style keep it up
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Old Jan 28, 2016   #14
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thank you guys nothing sets my mood better than cncs of my replays
btw, i'm training my movements
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Old Jan 28, 2016   #15
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Parallel lines: Beautiful movement, do focus on perfecting it.

At frame 373, try to change the direction of the momentum more fluidly, maybe hold the knee? ;)

Also, try to get to a better pose after the decap, which was quite nice btw, maybe a little basic.
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Old Jan 29, 2016   #16
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Bump!
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Old Jan 29, 2016   #17
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Damn, that was gr8. So fluid and cool. But i dont really like the idea of only dcap.

4.5/5
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Old Jan 30, 2016   #18
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uuugh my movement is gone uuugh
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Old Jan 30, 2016   #19
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Music For The Deaf
opener was really sweet
the split looks good but also looks like it could have more power in it
decap was meh, i think try to aim for the neck with your foot for decaps (or your hand)
That boom split was SICK
Great crotch kick, looked very powerful!
I don't like how you were on the floor there for a few frames
Where you kinda touched the glute I think you could maybe try and DM it
Pose is cool

8.5/10
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Old Feb 1, 2016   #20
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moovement againn
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