At 1:00 you should also apply rays to the text because at the moment it doesn't fit
Also I think that the shaking of the screen at 1:00 is good but it looks a bit weird because the text doesn't move
Also at 1:03 the red overlay at the bottom of the screen just suddenly appears out of nowhere
The way you used all those cuts to fit the glitchy song was nice but it would have been better if you added some blur in between the cuts so that it flows a little better
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