Toribash
the movements was wonderful
dms are ok
i most liked the moment 500-250. really smothly
but wrist dm on the eightieth frame was waste i think
nice job
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As rny said, the movement was nicely executed even though it was somewhat generic.
I have a feeling that you wanted to get a double knee with that 1st kick but you failed as you DMed uke's hip with your knee. Would have preferred if you dmed both knees but it's alright as it is.
After the 1st kick you've waited a bit too long which ruined your flow.
The movement before the decap was really nice. That spin especially.
I liked that sneaky wrist DM. Had to watch the replay couple of times to see what got it. Gj.
Transition to pose was alright.
Cheers.
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that was very very twitchy ._. but your movement was cool (just erase the twitches)
but then you grabed and it got really boring and noob-ish
the decap was disappointing but the last kick was really cool
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riddler at your door
Gross opener, you should of started it how you followed up at frame 475..
Your left arm was in the air for a good 40 frames whilst you flipped around on the floor.
Not sure what to say for frames 300 -> 240.
The first kick seemed really useless, the first kick was okay, but the second kick got a dismember with your shin, so that's lame.
The rest is just all over the place and unpleasant to watch, so I'm not going to continue CnCing it.
I don't really know how I feel about this replay... As Theee said, it's fairly twitchy, so try and work on that for your following replays... please.
Last edited by Donkey; Sep 9, 2015 at 12:53 PM.
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First frames of the opener were incredible twitcy.
Double knee hit was really cool.
Elbow hit is ok.
3rd kick was impressive.
Leg dm was meh.
Decap too.
Final kick was cool.
Transition to pose was twitcy but the pose is ok.

Be less twitcy when u do ur replays and try to make more boom hits. Gj
ok
Originally Posted by NICOLAS135 View Post
try to make more boom hits.

trying to focus on style is better in the long run
not much to that replay, so i'll get this next one

eh, can't help the twitchin'
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