Tsunami's opener is really cool with the amount of momentum forward you get, but then it gets really messy with the dm's, try to not slam uke to the ground to then keep going, it just kills the flow of the replay unless you pull of something shitfacedly cool.
Fly like a bird had some good movement within the manip but also alot of hits that barely did anything to help it other than to be a hit so you can convert into the next one, which is fine most of the time but here it just gets kinda "get to the dm's already". But you did get the manip going again BUT uke did touch the ground which made me ree inside my head.
Finished off the manip decently BUT THE FUCKING HEADBRUISE, lol. Good dm's overall and pretty good use of your entire tori, didn't enjoy the little stop you did for the kick that killed your speed within the dm's, skeet was a nice addition. Cork was a cool addition to end of to the pose.
Bunny hop hop hop has some decent maniping just that there isn't alot of things that happen and you pretty much just belly rub against uke the entire time, the split and the decap were decent but the replay came of sloppy for the sole reason of you rubbing up on uke the entire time.
Mainpoints i'd say you need to improve on is the use of your entire tori throughout the replay so it sticks together, there's alot of downtime where you see you're only using certain bodyparts and it gets iffy at times. And also try to stay away from set openers from wushu haha, or things that look like certain openers u tend to do within the MP scene. BUT, here comes the favourite thing with you, you spew out the oldschool vibe hardcorely, even though there's alot of elements that speak for the times within recent years of madman/ukebashing.
It's honestly great to see people coming back, but for this time it'l be a no on my vote.
AAND also i'm not into Madmans as much as i used to be, so my judgement will probably biased towards what i enjoy to see since stopping to do them a couple years ago now.
But keep it up man.
Fly like a bird had some good movement within the manip but also alot of hits that barely did anything to help it other than to be a hit so you can convert into the next one, which is fine most of the time but here it just gets kinda "get to the dm's already". But you did get the manip going again BUT uke did touch the ground which made me ree inside my head.
Finished off the manip decently BUT THE FUCKING HEADBRUISE, lol. Good dm's overall and pretty good use of your entire tori, didn't enjoy the little stop you did for the kick that killed your speed within the dm's, skeet was a nice addition. Cork was a cool addition to end of to the pose.
Bunny hop hop hop has some decent maniping just that there isn't alot of things that happen and you pretty much just belly rub against uke the entire time, the split and the decap were decent but the replay came of sloppy for the sole reason of you rubbing up on uke the entire time.
Mainpoints i'd say you need to improve on is the use of your entire tori throughout the replay so it sticks together, there's alot of downtime where you see you're only using certain bodyparts and it gets iffy at times. And also try to stay away from set openers from wushu haha, or things that look like certain openers u tend to do within the MP scene. BUT, here comes the favourite thing with you, you spew out the oldschool vibe hardcorely, even though there's alot of elements that speak for the times within recent years of madman/ukebashing.
It's honestly great to see people coming back, but for this time it'l be a no on my vote.
AAND also i'm not into Madmans as much as i used to be, so my judgement will probably biased towards what i enjoy to see since stopping to do them a couple years ago now.
But keep it up man.
Jun 2, 2023 - .best. day. ever.
