too many replays, i'll just look at 1
lul:
your movement is pretty stiff and not very stylish, it looks more like you're dming for the sake of dming (which i'm sure any replaymaker has done before). if you add more relax into your movement and put some flair into it you'll look very good.
dms look a bit messy later on but it flows good, i especially like the elbow dm using the knee