Toribash
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Need advice on replay
I started making a replay and I'm kind of new and need some help. Here is what I have so far:

I know there is ghosting out the ass, cant hep it.
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enoughsipin4you.rpl (72.3 KB, 31 views)
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I liked your spin but you held it for a bit too ling and ended up not really doing anything after it. :c
hi rawwrh, im going to hurt you with this 1 sorry.

opener very fucking gneric really dont do this.

spin was shit and the form was terrible

manip was a bit odd

dont ghost.
hold your neck.
dont be so floaty
DONT BE SO FUCKING
STIFF.