clean - i mean it wasnt bad but i feel like the end was just made in 10 minutes
the little kick that tapped the hand was cool but the elbow dm looked like an accident and it looked messy when your knee and shin hit when you're meant to be hitting with your foot
also the chest getting stuck on your foot was kinda shit, you could have just repositioned the kick and that would have been solved. you slowed down quite alot when you landed which looked ugly. try avoid that.
you looked like you fell over before going into that next jump
jump itself had alot of potential, using the arm and leg at the same time can generate a fuckton of height and spin, however that potential was not used. you used the arm and leg almost at separate times and that looked ugly but also killed your momentum making you go for that last kick which imo looked balls.
you could have done a full spin around or something and made it look alot more flashy but instead went for that kick on the torso which killed your flow and everything
jump into pose was meh and pose was meh and replay bugged and w/e, i'll just stop stating the obvious now
start was cool and the first kick was decent but it went waaay downhill from there
dirty - better
the punch this time around was pretty clean, but your transition into the pose was pretty awkward and could have been simplified quite alot.
the twitchy leg kinda ruined the step, and i know people say that being relaxed is good or whatever but personally i think you should have had a much more held-up pose than that.
could have just pressed c after the punch and posed kinda nicely there
punch was still pretty fuckin cool
Last edited by Dezrai; Nov 26, 2014 at 04:27 PM.