Uh, looks a little stretched vertically, i'd make it a bit shorter, i.e bring the mouth a little higher, and the nose shorter.
otherwise, looks okay but its a really early WIP.
I think the mapping isn't good, however unlike Headles, I think the shading could be something unique, it doesn't quite follow the normal ways of the shade, I like it. Keep it up!
yeah definitely lower the eyes or condense the entire thing vertically
not sure of what type of look youre going for here though, i know its an early WiP
right now with the eyes looking like theyre looking opposite directions it looks kind of derpy. i suggest fixing that if you are going for a different look
if you're going to put something on top like hair, or a hat or something. lower the eyes. but if you arent, and youre just going to leave it featureless, keep the eyes there.