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Kk. I also included a new one.
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Marco~ Butler.rpl (116.0 KB, 16 views)
Marco~ Diplopia.rpl (38.1 KB, 15 views)
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Butler: The opener looked kinda wushu-ish, but there's no problem with that. The split kick and decap was well placed, but you should have used up the remaining frames and did more things. Anyway, hold your neck next time.

Diplopia: Make a better opener. Your position for the decap was weird. Anyway, the decap was okay, but again, do more things because you have lots of frames left.
Heart of Gold
Butler: Somewhat generic looking opener, but nice. First kick could be a little better, both kicks look smooth enough. You could use the remaining frames, though.
Lovely replay.

Diplopia: Odd opener, kick looks weird.
Still, looking forward to seeing the finished product.
I edited Butler with your CnC in mind.
Attached Files
Marco~ Butler (Edited).rpl (173.8 KB, 16 views)
Last edited by Estimax; Dec 22, 2014 at 01:23 PM.
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What you edited in Looks pretty jerky; not that smooth.
Still, adds to the replay.
Personally, I think you should mess around with the remaining frames, or edit them out.

But, replay is still good. 8/10 cookies for you.
Well, you can still edit it if you feel that it's not yet perfect (to your standards). If you ask me, I say you should leave that replay as it is. Start a new one, but now, apply what kameron is telling you.
Heart of Gold
Kk. I am making a new one. I will probably lower the frames a tad bit.
R.I.P DOG
Ryan will be remembered.