here are a couple of my replays that i edted/made really enjoy them i hope u do 2

Backstab I would've liked better if you didn't just sit around for 300 frames.

This I would've perferred.

is that all your going to do.....
give advice dont just comment on half a replay and leave the rest, finish your advice.

any way I thought that the same thing larfen was saying.
your main problem in that replay is just stopping you need to keep moving forwards and never stop, you were also very very stiff relaxxxxxxx and let the relax itself built power for you it gets pretty natural with lots of practice and skills.
you also need to learn not to be semetrycal, it ruined replays with bad Dm's and pretty much the same thing over and over again.

now your next replay was better in my favor becuase of the relax it is still stiff but at least you gave an attempt at trying to relax

and your final replay Is just a very fast uke vs. tori concept but Dm is very low try to keep on moving and dont use the uke for your Dm's.

overaLL 6/10

thanks for the advice, ive been trying to relax more and get better at dming but once i try to relax a joint i mess up and dont get the dm

here r a few more replays i did
i hope these are better

In my first post I said you shouldn't be semetrycal.

apparently you missed that?

when u say semetrycal... Sorry if its a noob question

Symmetrical means both sides of your Tori's body doing the same thing, so if you do different things with each side of you Tori it makes for a better replay. Check out the replays as an example. The first is symmetrical, the second is not and it shows you how much better it looks.

that makes sense thanks 4 the clarifying

well heres my last set of replays 4 this post