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[Tex] First Flame Attempt
So i was playing earlier and i saw a flame in use for the first time, i decided to go and attempt to make my own. After several hours of messing around and figuring out what does what i came up with this. Its an attempt at a Black and Red wing. Please tell me what you think and any improvements that can be made or advice I just started so please don't be too harsh :P
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5AGEoBW6xXQ
Last edited by addicted; Feb 25, 2011 at 01:42 AM.
I'm going to close this and talk to the other mods about this.
Not so sure if we should feature this in the Art-Board.
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
I'm an artist.
Opened again.
I feel they are, if people want to give some constructive criticism on this, feel free.
It would be better if you'd show us a video so we can see how it moves though.
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
I'm an artist.
aww.
dislike the color.
and the flame sucks anyways.

(sorry, no constructive critic.)

Then don't post. You have been warned. ~Alpha
Last edited by AlphasoniK; Feb 24, 2011 at 12:44 PM.
lol.
Ya a vid would probably be better :/ Ill try and get one up
The color didnt come out perfectly but i think it looks good, if not what do u think it should be?
O and By the way, thank you alpha for allowing flames in the art section, i appreciate you asking the other mods and getting their input
Last edited by addicted; Feb 25, 2011 at 12:48 AM.
Idk its not that bad for a first flame

But its kinda weird since the "wing" is going under the arms
Rondo
If you want to make a wing. Rise the flame direction a bit up and make it not reaching the hip.
I don't like it anyways, still this is pretty nice for a first try.
Do it with style or don't even bother doing it.
I tried to raise the direction, didnt really work, and im not 100% sure what the most ideal body part would be for the flame to orbit to make the wing effect, this was simply my take on a wing, not really good but i thought it would be good for a first try
Would appreciate it if anyone who knew how to make wings gave me some advice