Hey all. Saw a friend cover this song and decided I might do the same. Trying to figure out which parts are good right now and which parts need work - Not demanding CnC, but it's always appreciated. I'm aware the track could do with a bit more dynamic variance - I'm going to work on that, so you don't need to tell me that.

https://clyp.it/qumb2byz

Program used: Logic Pro X

i like that, i think it could use more dynamic variance however

Hah. What did you think of the balance of the low octave vs. higher octave singing (comes in after the first chorus)? Were you a fan of one more than the other + would you extend/shorten the amount of time I spend in either?

it was okay but i think it could use more color

Thanks for your terrific assistance. Will add more blue next time.