Toribash
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Replay Palace
Replay thread etc...

Starting with these three replays:
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#G - Bettest.rpl (96.6 KB, 28 views)
#G - Ella Elle La.rpl (171.0 KB, 23 views)
#G - Stuff.rpl (195.6 KB, 18 views)
Last edited by Gwie; May 28, 2010 at 01:16 AM.
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Comment please! I know I suck, but I'm learning. >.>

:P
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#G - I can't take no more.rpl (91.2 KB, 21 views)
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1: Decap was cool, split was alright, flowed ok, pretty nice.
2: Decap here was awesome, although I think you should have left it at that, as there was, in my opinion, too long of a pause between the decap and the other dismembers.
3: Elbow dismember was cool, although I dislike your actions before said elbow.
4: Probably my favorite, lots of dismemberments in a short amount of time, nice!

Overall, I think you have the hang of getting dismembers and all that, and a basic idea of style (although there is still room to improve). The main problem I see in your replays is how much grab you used, waaay too much imo, although I still enjoyed watching your replays very much.
Good job.
Last edited by VIDEOGAMES; May 28, 2010 at 01:39 AM.
oh yeah
Bettest was pretty good, could've used a little less grab but it was nice.
Ella was a nice and simple decap(so was the ending lol), I wanted to see some more speed and less grab toward the end.
Stuff: very nice replay, imho I think one out of two of those kicks could lead to multiple dms.
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Last edited by kylan97; May 28, 2010 at 01:35 AM.
Strictly a replay maker with a LOW amount of tc. (;
Originally Posted by bishop1 View Post
1: Decap was cool, split was alright, flowed ok, pretty nice.
2: Decap here was awesome, although I think you should have left it at that, as there was, in my opinion, too long of a pause between the decap and the other dismembers.
3: Elbow dismember was cool, although I dislike your actions before said elbow.
4: Probably my favorite, lots of dismemberments in a short amount of time, nice!

Overall, I think you have the hang of getting dismembers and all that, and a basic idea of style (although there is still room to improve). The main problem I see in your replays is how much grab you used, waaay too much imo, although I still enjoyed watching your replays very much.
Good job.

Thanks. I'll try to improve that. \o/

Originally Posted by kylan97 View Post
Bettest was pretty good, could've used a little less grab but it was nice.
Ella was a nice and simple decap(so was the ending lol), I wanted to see some more speed and less grab toward the end.
Stuff: very nice replay, imho I think one out of two of those kicks could lead to multiple dms.
DONT YOU EVER NINJA ME AGAIN lol

Pretty the same of what bishop1 said, thanks anyway.


By the way, what do you think about the other replay, "I can take no more"?
asdasd
Bump.
Why is it that you guys don't comment on my replays?
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#G - Kindless.rpl (133.8 KB, 16 views)
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Not bad, some grab hits but not bad at all. The hits were pretty sweet... apart from the grabs. It was kinda messy too. Keep on practising and you'll most likely improve a lot. GG sir.
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Pretty nice replay you got there gwie.

Even if it was a bit messy and grabby the hits were enjoyable and it was fun to watch.
Also you should work more with relax because it was kinda stiff.
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Thanks for the comments guys! I'll try to improve the things you told me to.
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Bump.
Hurr, I'm lazy doing replays but heh, I've just made this one...
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#G - It's time.rpl (191.4 KB, 13 views)
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