@Haku: welcome aboard o/ (even though I'm hella late), love to have you around
@Diamond: well, well. Sorry for being so goddamn late but I'll cnc your stuff, sorry about the late.
alison: all of your movements in this spar were mostly extremely exaggerated and uncontrolled. Often you get into positions where your joints are overextended, if I were to compare your movements to someone singing I would say you are screaming, everything is too noticeable. That pointed I think is important to note that, even so, your movements are not bad. Using grabs and your "audacious" style truly calls my attention in a good way, I love it. Never afraid of hitting and always going towards the duel (just be careful if your partner, if he is your partner, is okay with that).
The dodging was stylish too and your hits powerful; lacks on speed and balance recover due to the overextended momentum.
alison2: now this, this is amazing! Just like before you never hesitates going forward the opponent and smash him, plentiful of contact fight and still the realism was maintained to its style. You fight like a madman! I loved your launch and how you don't feel pity towards him, always punishing his flaws and fighting back everytime he tries something.
Just try not turning you back to your enemy too much as you did at the final parts.
alison5: Here you have more controlled and smooth movement. Everything here is great and you followed up with your partner (?) pretty well in this one. In spite of this replay simplicity it was well done.
As negatives, avoid raising your arms too much, seriously, you did it too often
alison6: this replay has 2 issues cited before, the arm thing and the clumsy/"loud" movements. Looks like you payed a lot more of attention to the fight in this spar. Often responding well to your opponent's movements and intentions.
alison7: this is different... I don't know what you did at first but I love your flip dodge jump thing, crazy, but awesome! This punch was also one of the most beautiful powerful hits I've ever seen!
You kinda started goofing around after this, though. The next move was slow and executed in a weird position. You started doing some movements probably classifiable as dancing moves and went all gypsy or something.
Looks like you trolled this spar but I can't say it doesn't look like a fight in the slightest, and the ending itself was just as good as your previous ones so, it's still quite enjoyable.
I think that's pretty much it, you fighting is great and your style pleases me a lot. Try giving your movements more consistency and control. Know what to do and how long your moves should last etc etc
any specific point to help you out (if possible), just hit me up
also hit me up if you want to join RSO discord server (in case you haven't yet)
sorry about the lazy cnc too, but I am tired today ~~