Well, the opener was nice, a nice gain of flow, smoothness all around. However, the main flaw that bugs me is how stiff you keep your elbows. Don't get me wrong, your arms helped a lot with making this opener, but the stiffness, I couldn't get past.
Moving on, once you've gone airborne, you somewhat wrapped your arm around uke. This didn't fit in too well, considering your whole body was moving in the other direction. Feel like all that momentum from the opener kind of got killed right after that wrap and grab.
Anywho, that was pretty nice, getting a full core boom plus an extra pec. Gj. Although, the second boom didn't impress me too much. Try not to kick with mostly your shin, makes quite the messy kick. I mean, sure, shin kicks get more DMs, but if the kick itself looks ugly, well, then it's not really worth it.
The pose was a tad twitchy on the lags, and you can easily fix that swinging leg at the end.
Overall, pretty nice replay.
You know your stuff on booms, but try to mix a bit of style into it.