Hi guys, I recently made a replay and i think its pretty good http://forum.toribash.com/replay.php?download=15628 however, i think it could be better. I want you guys to give me your opinions on what i can add, i will do it then remake the replay, ill be happy to hear your thoughts

hi...
cool replay but...
you dont must to ask
if you see it cool...
it will be cool!

Great replay for a person somewhat new to Toribash. One thing to improve on is the reality on the replay, make it look like you're standing, try relax more often, and let the moves you do flow.

Sparring, but an example: Spar
PM me if you need any help!

this should be in the replays section not beginner sanctuary.

For the replay, work on getting multiple dms in each hit.
Also, try not to be so jerky, be more relaxed; it looks more realistic.