1. way too slow. you can have some slow passages with such a song but there has to be more speed up.
2. introduction was nice, but you need another color for that name at the beginning. I could barely see it. Also try to use a small effect on the title, like a decent fade or something.
3. outro: one couldnt read the names cause they were too fast
4. on the scnd replay the freecam was to shaky and moved to much, this disturbed the ambient of the scene.
5. put your flashs better: the sync of them was good but first of all it wasnt steady, which means that you put some special weight on them, as they underline a scene. So there only two possibilities: only few flashes, very aggressive, hard, strong, fast and with a big ammount. Or steady ones over the whole video with lower ammount, not that fast but awesome synced with music and hits.
6. there were some simply black parts, which I couldnt interpret and somehow disturbed me
That's all critics that come into my mind when seeing this from a critical point.
most positive things:
- awesome quali
- nice replays (even if mine wasnt in :P)
- introduction was neat
- great song
2. introduction was nice, but you need another color for that name at the beginning. I could barely see it. Also try to use a small effect on the title, like a decent fade or something.
3. outro: one couldnt read the names cause they were too fast
4. on the scnd replay the freecam was to shaky and moved to much, this disturbed the ambient of the scene.
5. put your flashs better: the sync of them was good but first of all it wasnt steady, which means that you put some special weight on them, as they underline a scene. So there only two possibilities: only few flashes, very aggressive, hard, strong, fast and with a big ammount. Or steady ones over the whole video with lower ammount, not that fast but awesome synced with music and hits.
6. there were some simply black parts, which I couldnt interpret and somehow disturbed me
That's all critics that come into my mind when seeing this from a critical point.
most positive things:
- awesome quali
- nice replays (even if mine wasnt in :P)
- introduction was neat
- great song
but in sony vegas it was like normal and when rendered it was very faster than in the preview.
