I know bumps are frowned upon, but I'd really like to get some CnC on my last replay before I start on a new one.
I'm not the best replay maker, but i'm not the worst. So, I'd really love some feedback, guys.
I'm not the best replay maker, but i'm not the worst. So, I'd really love some feedback, guys.
Bumps are frowned upon? I think bumps are normal for replay threads.
On to your replay, the opener looked pretty stiff on the limbs. Mostly between 573-500. It looked rather robotic in the parts after raised your arm and contracted your knee. The split is good enough, but it looked weak. As if no impact were made. The following dms were ok, but with that setup, I think you could manage to do a boom there. The last kick is probably the best part of this replay but again, with that speed, you could fit in another dm along with those two dms.
Not bad, but not good either. It did follow a flow and you managed to not break it throughout the replay, but it lacked destruction or style. There's a lot of room for improvement, and I do think you will improve by time.
On to your replay, the opener looked pretty stiff on the limbs. Mostly between 573-500. It looked rather robotic in the parts after raised your arm and contracted your knee. The split is good enough, but it looked weak. As if no impact were made. The following dms were ok, but with that setup, I think you could manage to do a boom there. The last kick is probably the best part of this replay but again, with that speed, you could fit in another dm along with those two dms.
Not bad, but not good either. It did follow a flow and you managed to not break it throughout the replay, but it lacked destruction or style. There's a lot of room for improvement, and I do think you will improve by time.
Last edited by sprytryne; Dec 29, 2012 at 07:53 AM.
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Pretty good, The opener looked really good.
The split looked very weak, you should just extend your knee.
The next hits were alright, but seems like you extend yoiur knee too fast, so it didn't looked that powerful.
the last hit had big potential, you should make it as a boom.
Pose was not bad.
*requesting cnc?
The split looked very weak, you should just extend your knee.
The next hits were alright, but seems like you extend yoiur knee too fast, so it didn't looked that powerful.
the last hit had big potential, you should make it as a boom.
Pose was not bad.
*requesting cnc?
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Nice opener.
Split looked really weak, and as 17april said, you could extended your knee more.
Elbow DM looked weak too, because you extended your knee too fast.
Decap looked powerful a bit, but seems not really clean.
Next hit could be done as a boom.
I kinda liked the pose, but your hands were stiff something.
*CnC me?
Split looked really weak, and as 17april said, you could extended your knee more.
Elbow DM looked weak too, because you extended your knee too fast.
Decap looked powerful a bit, but seems not really clean.
Next hit could be done as a boom.
I kinda liked the pose, but your hands were stiff something.
*CnC me?
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