omfg i can't see what is happening here,too much thing at once,but lets go for parts:
the opener:
*it started good i guess,but when you got close to uke,you seem to be moving only one joint at once,like,you get whole body stiff to move one part,dont do that.
-the manipulation:
*it just started to get sick here,but i just didnt liked some parts you changed the direction of you spin,also wold be AMAZEBALLS if you got flawless during it,but still epic.
-starting the hits
*hell,this is just amazing,not much to complain here,just some parts that wold make even more dms,damn,too much things happening here,like,you get splitted,and both parts stay to attack uke,damn this can gave someone nightmares...
EPIC,loved those last hits and the little skeet to arm
-ending:
i guess the ending wold be better if you legs didnt fall off,but nice.