Ranking
opener was very floppy
the spin to the core was nice as rice
whats up with your knee throughout the transition D: was stiff and twitchy
nice boom
cool punch
cool pose
7/10 your a little stiff but also a bit too relaxed
Wip
just cant understand that is not dm
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I want in basic replays
Opener
I didn't like how you halted the flow of the replay with the elbow. I get what you were going for and i really like that you tried it out keep going for more cool stuff like that. I think it would look better in a video format. I didn't like how you halted the flow because the initial opener was so smooth, and I enjoyed the slickness of it.

The Middle Bits
After the elbow bit i loved the movement i thought the flip was pretty cute, but there was nothing to "WOW" about it the landing you did after words didn't do anything with the momentum you got from the flip you just landed.

The Part were you hit uke
I didn't like the initial grab orhow you got your head bonked. BUT MOTHER OF GOD DID I LOVE THOSE HITS. i love how you went for the knee then got a new grab for the torso my only compliant about it is that you didn't go for more because the DMs you got looked so good it looked like one fluid motion and i love that.

Overall
Very smooth
Good DMs
3/5
Welcome back to making replays can't wait to see more of this
Trying